Tuesday, 7 June 2016

100 Word Challenge W6 T2

Dear Mum and Dad

I am writing to tell you that I have been shot and am in a very severe condition and could die.You should come and see me before I die.This is how it started...I was in a trench and was loading my gun I look away for two seconds and I look up a man is yelling at me.’Say your last words’ in a angry voice and SUDDENLY I know at that point that my live was over.I thought I would be left to die but a charming man come to save me.
THE END

2 comments:

  1. I love your 100 word challenge. Who is the charming man??/

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  2. Hey Erin,
    I like this 100WC, it is very mysterious but I'm sure that at the end it is suppose to be 'came' not 'come'!
    Come check out my blog at
    http://sssophiah.blogspot.co.nz/
    Sophia Hasan-Stein.

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